Leather Aroma
Shivering in ecstasy
A submissive kiss
Crack of a whip
Joy of Painful sensation
An erotic smile
Masculant demand
opposite extremes collide
Intimate pleasance
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The Dominant and the submissive and all the kinky things 
Written December 5th, 2004
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pleasure screams out with a crack of a whip. tears of passion flow with each plee for more. then comes the sign of heaven when all is satisfied, or is it....
I liked reading this piece. As it was alot of fun to read and explore the meaning between the lines. -
very well written
Very intriging write. I like the images your chosen words conjure up in my mind.
I am glad to read that it all ends in pleasure.
etherealforu
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Lol very nice write diffrent but i like that. Last time i try anything new to sex i ended up with my daughter. Great piece of work this very nice.
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Nice Write it was short but to the point I enjoyed this, Oh and Tahutihotep is right it is one hell of a turn on. I loved it! *val*
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have you ever been tied up and worked over with an ice cube before sex? you should try it. its' a hell of a turn on.
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I think my lines can be matched to personalities
but I am thinking of taking a class on haiku..
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I read all types of writes because life is composed of all kinds of puzzle peices, so if you are to see the whole puzzle you need all the peices that exist don't you...lol
A poem is merely a picture of life, so if something exists in life it should be written about, I feel. Different people have different likes in what they read about, so they can choose to read or not read what one has written. I believe one should write about all areas if one is to become a well rounded author.
I've been pretty good tho a bit under the weather right now, the throat is raw and I think I might have caught what's going around, I hope not be if so will just have to deal with it...
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long time no critique
LOL wow Now you have put naughty ideas in my head..I thank you for the comment..Gosh do you really think I scared anyone I don't see how ?
Thanks again for the comment Eddy..
PS Eddy this is the 2nd erotic write you read of mine..How have you been ?? Hope all is good and now I am off to see yours
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subculture meets daylight
lips meet boots
eyes lowered in submission
bad boy
Hugs...Eddy
You sure didn't get many comments considering the number of views...are ppl scared someone is gonna think their a perv if they leave a comment...lmbo...it exists...it part of life...get over it...right...
Edited on Jan 27, 2:12 p.m. because 'subworld meet daylight'. -
I can smell the leather, hear the crack of the whip...very vividly written!!! shivering with fear right now, but awesomely done, very tasty tidbit.
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wow
*soft smile* talk about divine intervention I was returnign the favor after your kind words regarding my poem about my dad and I click on a piece and walla a smile as I receive an unexpected surprise. This piece flowed seamlessly and needless to say truly diverted my mind even if only for a few moments. Thank you for your kind words and your diversion. -
unique and simple yet convays so much
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All the KinKy things indeed...sounds like a very interesting and sexy event...greatly described and arotic...thanks for sharing....hope to read more soon...
Jessixa
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