If every moment is two moments
Than each moment i see you
Is one less moment i can touch you
If no one is born just once
Than every time you look into my eyes
My soul is reborn
If everyone falls asleep and the world disappears
Than i would sleep forever with you in my dreams
so that you will never vanish
If you are never deaf through love
Than the eloquent melodies of your life
Never leave my side or heart
If i were to fall apart
Your smile is all it would take
To replace my fugitive pieces.
Author notes
***this poem was inspired by Anne Micheals' novel Fugitive Pieces...***
Written December 2nd, 2004
A contest entry
- one liners (un paquebots) by fall into me.
400 points, ended December 16, 2004, 92 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great write. I lvoed this poem, and i'm usually pretty critical...each stanza is so in depth. It seems like if each one were in its own poem, it would make every one of those poems worth reading. I can really feel how your feeling about t his person. Keep up your writing, your good at it.
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