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I will make it

I am draped with tears
Waiting for your return
To make me back to a whole person
To bring back those old memories
Sleeping every night, imagining only your eyes
Covered with those lying dreams
I've given up my lies
And am going to make it with or without your love
I will toughen up
And will once again be happy
Your old memories have moved on and so have I

Author notes

just about gettin back on feet...and by the way i choose option 1
Written December 4th, 2004

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  • Abscessed
    December 5, 2004
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    absolutely amazing. this one just struck a chord! i really enjoyed reading this....and could relate to every line.
    im really glad you entered the contest! thank you for sharing!


  • sarahbethb17
    December 5, 2004
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    Nice! Very empowering. You put a lot into a very small amount of writing, great job!
    Good luck in the contest!
    Take care and God bless!
    Sarah Beth