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Athena and Terrell's long-distance love affair

My soul soars higher than the shimmering stars
My Love Athena quenching deep burning desires
My spirit flies farther than God's gloriousness above
My Saavik-Kam, my friend, and my one true Love

Her hair flows like waves surging with the storm's tide
Her wisdom and beauty blindingly shines from inside
Her name's from the goddess of love, in Greece of old
Her talents burst forth freely, so impossible to hold

Our relationship new as a babe, but wonderously ancient
Our long-distance separation doesn't hinder us so patient
Our closeness grows stronger with each second that passes
Our adoration mounts more steadly as "one", and emasses

We share all things in common; music, stories, and passions
We care for each other eternally; not caring for mere fashions
We dare to go boldly towards a future; regardless of our ages
We fare our loneliness together; writing daily endless pages

     ~~Mere words can't describe how I feel for you, and desire!  I think about you day and night; each second of every minute for hours all day, my love!  "S'Gapoe" means I Love You... in Greek; and I do, so much, Athena - my Greek Goddess of love!~~

Author notes

I waxed poetic, and wrote this in 5 minutes; while responding by E-Mail to my long-distance "lover" that lives half-way 'round the world from me (in Southern California, U.S.A.) in Athens, Greece.
Written December 4th, 2004

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