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Sweet Words (2)

sweet words
          heard
               within those memories
laughter
       found
              in it's sweet embrace
lips
   tasted
         as a moment revealed
where magic
          sought
                in the promise
                              never forgotten
But in that
           smile
                  I found
                         my wish.

Dec. 2, 2004

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Written December 4th, 2004

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  • Touchof1der silver member
    December 4, 2004
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    This background is cracking me up. It reminds me of a couple I was watching one evening while out with some friends. They were so intently lost in one another's gaze that they truly had goofy looks on their faces. It was great! What I wouldn't give to have a reason to look just as goofy right about now! Thank goodness for memories!
    ~Kimberly