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After School Alphabet

Leaping lizards
hit the books
hang coats
on the hooks

Munch lunch
not too hot
microwave
not a pot

Holy mackerel
wash that dish
boy it stinks
from tuna fish

Blasting music
is a crime
cops arrive
pay a fine

Feed the dog
feed the cat
not your face
get real fat

Author notes

I had a bunch of wagnets when I worked for the kids now my gradkids like playing with them
Written December 4th, 2004

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  • slick99
    August 28
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    my brother would really enjoy this poem. it's alot of fun to read... -slick99

  • darlintlc silver member
    June 1

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    So cute!!

    "Holy mackerel
    wash that dish
    boy it stinks
    from tuna fish"

    That's my most favorite part!!

    You are a joy to read!!

    darlintlc

  • HA! What a great write! I volunteer at a pre-school and a kid had tuna fish. Thanks for the grins and giggles!

    Mylee

  • grannyeri gold member
    January 13

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    What a cute write - great for the grandkids I bet. Liked the flow, the rhythm, rhyme and quickness of the poem. LOve your author page too. Doesn't gets do a great page? He did mine too and I sure am amazed at how many he does do on this site.


  • Forlorn Dreams
    July 1, 2007
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    This is very cute, i could always use a good laugh. i love the first stanza 'leaping lizards, hit the books, hang coats, on the hooks' the leaping lizard part was very cute and reminded me of an inside joke between myself and some friends. good memories. thanks for sharing and making my day a little bit brighter with you excellent poem.
    Kelcey


  • Sandygram silver member
    December 4, 2004
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    ABC, Another Beautiful Comments. Thank you so much pozo. It is a joy to know you and I always enjoy your comments. Take care friend,
    God Bless,
    Sandy
    Edited on Dec 04, 10:31 because ''.
  • pozo
    December 4, 2004
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    Lol, this was a funny poem- I liked your inspiration, such a great write about food although you should feed your face sometimes or you get real thin
    Thanks for commenting on my poem
    All the best,
    Pozo
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