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Waiting

Your always there in the empty spaces,
between my hallowed eyes, I still see the man of yesterday.

The kind compatsions that you showed..
where they only an act of symapthy?
Can't you rise from this apathy?
Or has it devoured your meaning to be?

For in your eyes a need grows,
so deep inside your soul,
Feeling I must touch,
A loving I must know.

Beneath that armor; A man is.
Who's face I wait to memorize,
dashes of sunsets and sunrises go by,
white haired people still holding hands.

My heart; desperation is growing,
that I will never truely know that knowing..
of a person who would come to me..
two souls of eternity.

Bound to be, by hands of times,
caught up in simplicity (which blinds me),
So vow this to me oh man beneath the mask..

You promised me eternity, but how long does eternity last?

Author notes

Bound to be, by hands of times,
caught up in simple vows,
So vow this to me oh man beneath the mask..

Written December 3rd, 2004

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  • Drimok
    December 4, 2004
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    wow thats totally great keep it up!

  • Dark Sheep
    December 3, 2004
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    T-thanks..

    Wow, I didn't even pick a wallpaper oO;

    Heh I will ^_^;