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Fantasy Dreams

Midnight Skies

Sapphire Blue Eyes

Calming Springs

Ghastly burning stars

And bright silvery skies

Oxygen and air mixed with

Flaming fire Aurlie's

Streaming milky-ways

Planets far beyond and

Your dreams move on

Relaxing sounds calm you down

Crickets and swirling winds

Night is shimmering away

And blue Sapphire skies appear

Burnt autumn leaves

Tall wide masculint Tree's

White milky clouds Breezing and whistling

Bruising wondrous eyes

And you say goodbye

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Written December 3rd, 2004

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  • Puppydog gold member
    February 20

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    SO SOOTHINGLY CALM AND BEAUTIFUL!!!

    Oh the many times my dreams have taken me to places I was able to only see in my imagination! Lying on the ground under the stars just letting my dreams whisk me away only to come back to the wonderful surroundings only nature can provide.


  • mrgomez504
    January 24
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    wow great poem, it keep my imagination going just like a dream