Naked
to night’s brilliant chill,
I tingle
in the stars.
Author notes
... hoping they were the only witnesses ...
Written December 2nd, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Midnight (contest) by Edge of Dreams.
300 points, ended January 30, 2005, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh, very nice. I was doing that very same thing last night. The shortness of this piece enhaced the awe of such a fine moment. lovely little work...
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*rofl*
Lol, yeah, I'd hope the same. This was short and sweet. Hope you did ok in the contest. Great job, darlin'. -Amanda -
You are a gem yourself, I see.
Jim Dunlap -
Nicole,
I wish you well with your group, but even with such a personal invitation as yours, I find that my maturity puts me a bit out of range of your group. Best of luck to you in all your pursuits.
And the next time you visit, perhaps you'd actually read and comment on my work, rather than just sending me a form letter.
Jane -
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~Nicole~ -
Darn the curtains were drawn...lol. It's amazing how that first word brings so many images to mind.
Sincerely,
Leo Long -
Sublime
that kinda puts the shudders down ones spine, A really brillaint poem. -
Twinkle twinkle little nude, skinny skiing is so lewd… and cold… I should imagine – lol. Interesting haikuesque form.
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UB -
you are coming to know me and my 'style' much tooo well. lol Thanks so much for noticing.
Jane -
You know, for such a short piece, this one conveys
a really vivid image. I particularly like how,
in the second line, you use "to night's brilliant
chill"...with the words "to night's" being able
to take on a dual meaning there.
Very nice!
UB
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Perfect.
Like a beautiful shiver, set my mind racing. -
oh wow! how nice this is! I LOVE to go out under the stars..... especially on a cold night... things just seem so much clearer. LOL LOVE the author comment... hilarious! YOu just have such a good sense of humor about you! ***smiles*** God bless you! ~Melissa
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Like a perfectly formed snow flake, this was lovely.
David
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