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Ode To The Book Club In Haiku

Have you read the book
'Suck My Dick' by Yours Truly?
It's a mouthful.

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Written December 2nd, 2004

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  • Tercil gold member
    December 3, 2004
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    saucy!!

    Then we better digest it. Heee!!


  • horus8 gold member
    December 3, 2004
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    Actually, he's still 5, and a I have a 4 month old son too.


  • My Seven Miseries
    December 3, 2004
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    LMFAO

    i didn't know you had a 6 year old. maybe you don't and i misunderstood out of stupidity(i wouldn't be surprised). that is really cool! i'm having my first in a few months.. anyways, about the poem.
    Very funny. i kinda figured it would be a mouthful, just by looking at your pics on here, and your erotica... just kidding.... or am i?
    Much love: kat


  • Wolf of Night
    December 2, 2004
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    LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yeah I enjoyed this gave me a smile!!!!!!!! Lighten up all you prunes!!! anyone under 12 should be supervised on the net!!!!! By the age 13 they no more about this then most adults!!!!!!!!! LOL!!!!! I enjoyed this even though other did not!


  • myron silver member
    December 2, 2004
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    funny

    a clever play with words - i enjoyed it; it's cheered me up.

    technically i'm not sure it's a haiku; it follows the 17 syllable format, but ignores the other more important requirements of the form.

    however i did find it very funny and clever & irreverent! & i also liked blondeoverblue's astute comments.


  • afterdark
    December 2, 2004
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    mwahaha this rocks! and there is a lack of positive comments on here so....
    WOOO! I WOULD HAVE NEVER THOUGHT OF THIS! GREAT TITLE TOO! AND HAIKUS ROCK! WOOOOO!
    annnd I'm done.
    <3 Violet

  • horus8 gold member
    December 2, 2004
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    Yeah, so, I have a six year old that
    isn't aloud to be on the internet without an adult present.
    Don't mistake humor for a bad day, it makes for
    a boring monologue.


  • blondeoverblue
    December 2, 2004
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    Technically speaking can a book be a 'mouthful'...irrespective of the title or author? Surely as books are read (or looked at, if you like the one's with the pictures ) It would follow that it is an eyeful.

    An amusing little ditty nevertheless.

    Kat

  • Joel Graham
    December 2, 2004
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    read it..
    was boring
    ended up reading
    marriage ads


  • ----michael----
    December 2, 2004
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    yeah I read it, but it was over way too soon. you should make it longer next time. lol.


  • Venessa
    December 2, 2004
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    Someone have a bad day? Might want to put this under adult just to be safe. I myself have a 9 year old on this sight that I would not want to read this by mistake.


  • Naughtygrlred
    December 2, 2004
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    I bet it is...

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