Full moon on
exquisite breeze
blooms jasmine
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Written August 12th, 2002
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Love it!
Mmmm, this is a sure delight! I love haiku on the moon and jasmine happens to be my most favourite flower. I like this 'ku and more so than being penned down in just 10 syllables, I admire the use of two senses in this haiku - the sense of sight and smell. Haiku which use more than just the sense of sight are very special to me
Now I feel like dancing under the full moon and lighting my jasmine incense sticks
Thank you for the pleasurable read.
Best wishes in your poetry journey,
Charishma -
Thid was vary good but i was wondering why it was 3-4-3 not 5-7-5??? Just wondering... this is like something id hear ina love song!
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This one I LOVE!!!!!! Well done!!!!! Really well done, this is nice and fresh!! I love it!! Luv, Lee -
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Simple and refreshing as spring rain. Loved it. = ) -
excellent
Beautiful, indeed. And nice picture! -
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mmm, I feel the bliss ... -
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Sis this is cute and fragrant..loved it...~~~GILL~~~ -
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.....and i can smell the flowers!
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Nice short poem. Quite a vision here with so few words. This is even less words (syllables) than a haiku. Well done.
Monk
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