I. Music and rise of men.
Glory and mystery amongst the ages,
Rising in the lighter east
To catch it’s white shadow fleeing
The journal of one man
Becoming the mist of a thousand men’s breath
The heart of the living deep
Within the hopes of soldiers
The loll and swagger
Grasp the exhausted, stronger than liquor
Maddening the mind, confusion
Becoming the organized rain
II. Bolts clatter and blood screams
In the ears of the silent
God’s anger splits the sky
And ignites the nervous forest candles
A page is turned and its blackness
Becomes a colored picture
Of once beating hearts, and
The history of the stricken mind
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Written December 1st, 2004
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An amazing display of talent and skill. This has a wonderful flow and sound brilliant when read aloud. Blessings and best wishes, ~richard
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i love this! it's so good! i love the great use of imagery and just... wow! Just one of the many reasons why i'm so thankful for my English classes... but this is a great piece of work!
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Whoa, this has literally left me speechless! An incredible
write! Powerful imagery.....amazing! I really, really love
this. You did an excellent job. I'm going to be bookmarking
this one
Wonderful write! God Bless you and take care!
~ Katie
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