Lost
In the busy metropolis
Of life.
Passed by
Without a second glance
Nobody notices
cares.
Author notes
AND now for the Avant-Guarde sort of writinnnnnnnnnng. I wanted to write something like this for awhile, but couldn't exactly get it out, so i chose the relatively nondescript/functional modern art approach. 
Written December 1st, 2004
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tis a dire thing and yet grand to be invisible as such and yet and yet. And thus it is known you are never alone. One who is truly important to your life will never pass you bye to say but nothing; As one of those, you are much too important to me for me to not care, should i notice, and i would only not notice because i don't see you all that often, i mean, i did move. Give it time, for "this too shall pass." (luv that quote) -
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Nice poem, short, but to the point, and all the more effective for that. Many people may not notice, but then again you can't try to get their attention or you're written off as attention seeking (in my experience)... but its nice to be noticed sometimes... but don't worry I know at least one person notices you
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i like this little piece it is really cool...cute and light and good!! isnt it the case of everyones life, no one notices yay..thats me the one that everyone ignores haha.
but nice job keep it up!
#kady
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i careeee!!!! and i notice you too! (especially when you try to sneak up behind me and i see you in window! hahaha)this was good, it was short and light, but had a lot of meaning to it. i like the word metropolis -- i dont really know why, i just do haha. it caught my short attention span nice job!
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indeed.....cities.....no body rly notices..says hi..smiles....nought...too abosorbed in their own things...hmm....well wat can we do....hehe
like the poem!!!!
well done! its simple but gooood
wooooo
well done!
~ania~
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