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Drop Out

Loser drop out. That is what she is called
If only they knew, if only they looked beneath all her flaws.
They  called her a pot head stoner, knowing that she wasn't going anywhere
but she had dreams, beyond dreams, and none of them could compare
to what she wanted and what she would do
It was only then that she saw through
The horrible experience people called "High School"
High school in Parma is for the richies, the emos, and the punks, the jocks, they left no room for the "Loonies"


It was them that would succeed, them that would go and and not be afraid to show people what they were
They didn't hide the fact that they were potheads, they even bragged about how many bags they could get for "so cheap man"
They didn't care! That is what makes the pothead dropout so beautiful, they think, they think about their future more than anyone, cause they know they fucked up,and she, she thought about it the most.

She knew flipping burgers, and smoking some good hydro wasn't gonna be enough to get her car running to get the hell outta here.
She knew that yes this the year of 2005 and five would be a great year
A year to start over
Start over and succeed,
Stop smoking the cancers, and stop smoking the weed,
Yes she knew what she was going to do
She was going to become a drug dealer, and make a hell allot more money than them FLUKES

You see the other kids at her old school, worked at burger joints and shopping malls forming clicks outside of school to make everyone they worked with feel like a joke, cause "oh we sell more than you so we are cool, and we are gonna talk behind your back until you quit and we succeed" Yes that is how it is, yea mother fuckers indeed

So she had this great get rich scheme, to just stop smoking and to start selling the great weed.
But her plan had a flaw, she wasn't going to succeed, everyone around her knew that she was about to start in her plan, and so they turned on her, and had their demands...

At her work " L****** is going to quit guys! And OMG you won't believe what she is going to do, she is going to start selling pot! yea I know it's unheard of, I mean how is she gonna get better weed than I?" Yes the clicky preppy people were buying pot too OH NO, Mothers that read this don't get your panties in a bunch, I am sure your preppy "I was a cheer queer" ass smoked more pot than your daughters do. But yes, they had a plan to abolish L*****...

So as she stepped into work, she saw the click, walk up to her
"hey girl how ya doing where ya been?"
"what do you want bitch, to make amends?"
"No we had something better in mind, if you go through with this drug phase, we want a dime, every time we wanna get high"
"yea right bitch your outta your mind! I would give you a dime if you put a gun to my head and said it's time"
"Well then we are gonna ruin your dreams you beautiful dreams, and make them ours, unless you do as we say with out a word."

So she was stuck once again, in this like long circle, with no friends to depend on.

High school will never leave, no matter if you drop out or if you succeed. People will still talk shit, and still make you made, but you should just be glad that you gave up, and are now a loser crack head going no where, but to pearl street to suck some dick for a couple hits that will only lasts you 4 and a half hours, until you cry wishing that you would have kept that job flipping burgers,not getting mad and rushing out cause they tried to back stab your plan, and wished you would have stayed in school succeeding to your fullest, but no your in a card board box next to the interface shelter with nothing left but your memories of a past that YOU, YOURSELF fucked up....

Don't blame anyone else but your self.

Author notes

Drop Outs are quiters, and I was there once, but I found a better form of highschool, Ths poem isn't for any particular person, just people that need to think about what they do before they do it. Don't drop out until you have another thing that is postive you are going for...
Written December 1st, 2004

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  • Dutch Doll
    December 7, 2004
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    ahhhh.... this write disturbed me for it brought back horrible flash backs of high school... EKE... but I like the way you vent... and gotta agree on it all. Nice write


  • BlindAndViolent
    December 1, 2004
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    Are you completely sure of that? Conveying the message is just as important as knowing it's true.

  • BlindAndViolent
    December 1, 2004
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    that didn't make much sense you know?


  • Mishielle
    December 1, 2004
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    hahaha, preps... Well some of the people that hang out with them are preps are cool, but I wouldn't call them preps, preps are preps and to me they are preps...lol


  • BlindAndViolent
    December 1, 2004
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    Them not deserving it--I mean. Some of them are alright--most of them aren't--but some of them are.

  • BlindAndViolent
    December 1, 2004
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    So you sure of that one?


  • Mishielle
    December 1, 2004
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    half was ryhme half wasn't I know it was a little weird, but like when I was talking about preps I wouldn't ryhme don't deserve that much credit


  • BlindAndViolent
    December 1, 2004
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    I liked it for the most part, the rhyme scheme and format could use some work, but the moral is decent. I was almost a high school dropout, but I managed to graduate a year early, so I understand it. Beyond the mechanical, it is a very good poem. Keep writing.

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