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An Eye For An Eye

A question that always
Gets me to thinkin’
Is how do you know
When a cyclops is winkin’
...and not just blinkin’?

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circa 2000
Written August 11th, 2002

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  • Exit-Stage-Right
    November 5, 2007
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    Good question and well written!

  • miSSareY
    March 19, 2004
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    maybe its just bwinking! but hi-laaarious poem, i laughed and its cool. OMG i just realised, ur background has an eye tooo! omg lol, i'm so dim hope u win!!!


  • ilovemygrape
    March 17, 2004
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    haha.. that's cute.. thanks for the entry

  • oneluckygirl
    December 11, 2003
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    Comments from 8th graders: Good, may be hard to understand without background knowledge; Ok for little kids; very creative; Strange!; Funny; Good, short and simple; Cute, I like it, funny; What's the purpose of this poem? Too short; Gets you thinking;Bad; Funny; Funny; Okay; I don't like it. Short and pointless; Something to wonder about; Neat ending but too short; It made me chuckle;

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  • WoundedAngel
    June 8, 2003
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    ROFLMAO.......gods....where do you think this stuff up? This is just so cute and silly....laughs

    -Angel aka WoundedAngel.

  • dottie
    September 29, 2002
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    excellent

    winking blinking and nod
    but a cyclops is quite odd
    if he winks then he sinks
    straight into the sod.

  • Bran
    September 7, 2002
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    excellent

    Good one.. -Brandon


  • coffee-agh
    August 16, 2002
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    excellent

    Are there monoculars? Good one -tj-

  • Jen Jen
    August 14, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Maybe we will never know. Just another one of life's great mysteries! **Laughs**
    :)

  • midnight sun
    August 13, 2002
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    excellent

    =) good question *sits pondering* hmm, i dunno! lol


  • Nam
    August 12, 2002
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    excellent

    i guess only a Cyclop's would know...

    :0)

    Nam


  • silica silver member
    August 12, 2002
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    neutral

    Cyclops women are rather less shy – they don’t rely on a flick of the eye.


  • Manicmuze
    August 11, 2002
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    excellent

    Lol :-)

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