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Not finished.

Four letters written in the sand,
an f, an a, a t, an e.
The tide will be here soon enough,
to wash my fate into the sea.

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Written December 1st, 2004

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  • TheMuffinMan
    December 1, 2004
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    Wow, two aplaudes and it isnt even done...Maybe I wont finish it...

  • OhSoSorry
    December 1, 2004
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    A+

    I can see the letters in the sand,
    and I can see the tide coming.
    Awesome.

  • Johnny Lunchbox
    December 1, 2004
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    Heh... cute.


  • Frankiedoodles
    December 1, 2004
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    Awww, i love this!! short and sweet and lovely dont finish it, i like it how it is

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