Twinkle, twinkle, little star,
Like the fireflies in my jar,
‘Till I wake up from my bed;
You’ll be sleeping--they’ll be dead.
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circa 1995-96,
Written August 11th, 2002
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A contest entry
- Nursery Crimes by leannewales.
300 points, ended December 12, 2003, 21 entries
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hahaha, the thinks we will find to tickle our muse.
Hope you don't get any hate mail from the FFPC
(Fire-Fly Protection Coalition)
You wit is as sharp as ever! -
another good one!!..lol...thankyou!!!..hugs...xxx
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good stuff
LOL, excellent little rewrite of a child’s nursery rhyme. How pleasantly twisted, I do approve. Good write.
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Poor little critters... they didn't know what was comin' did they. Good one!
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Now this does have that little bit of a naughty twist to it at the end, kind of a sad look at the end that is lost for the humor in the piece. It actually is a piece of conflicting emotion, you think it'll be sweet, then humerous, then wicked lol.
-Angel aka WoundedAngel.
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don't touch it!
what a wicked twist to such a great poem!
as such is life.....
personally i wore the light on my finger for my moonshine rings
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don't touch it!
This is so true. I know how that goes!!
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excellent
=( you killed the fireflies! cute poem -
excellent
poor little fly's with light's in their ass.
:0)
Nam -
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Fireflies – fireflies set them free! They may be reincarnated as a bee! -
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Aweeeee...:( How sad but cute in a way....
I never did catch any fireflies when I was a child as you will note in my 'Fireflies and You' poem...
Okay, this made me laugh but shhhh, it's a secret...:) ~ Ce
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LMAO!!!
ohhh how i cried when that happend to me as a kid
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