Dixie never tries to take away my pain
but gives, and gives, and never will relent
she fails to understand that i cannot,
simply take anymore of her
of her wantonness that she flashes
with exuberance, to every male,
all males, that walk, or sidle, or lounge near
she crinkles like a wrinkle left in time
but never fades, no cannot fade
she is a pariah that will not find her place
she walks out, head high
and lips pursed eager, a tiger slowly stalking
i do not think she knows, my Dixie,
that her time is running out
she will now whore to anyone, to anything that cares
and me, oh me, she does not care
that she's ruined me for life
my Dixie walks with swinging hips
through crowds and crowds of men
while i, i sit, and drink, and drink,
a numbing comatose, this liquid cocaine
that leaves me, paralyzed and happily
fogged to other times
where Dixie cried and tried to relieve herself
with me, and just me, her fingers devouring,
clawing, tearing, marking territory
she used me, yes, yes, she used me, i know
but i love her, my Dixie, and i cannot yet let go
so sitting here, I'll swill my drink, my lava-like cocaine
while Dixie slithers, or stalks, more like-
another victim for her prey
Nyx...
Author notes
she slithered back in.
Im not satisfied with it, it doesn't have that (INSANE OBSESSED) feeling to it.
i might tinker
Written December 1st, 2004
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hahahha! fuck the masses.... i can highlight my text just as well as anyone else... and i like this poem. what it does lack in that obsessive edge it kind of makes up for in a detailed expression of yearning and loathing all at the same time. hmmm....
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you might try highlighting it if it bothers you so much.
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You might try another color for your text so people can read it.
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Good. I like Dixie much better than I like Ted. MUCH better. She is brilliant in her debaucherous nature. After having read so many of these (heh all of them actually), I think Dixie is exemplary of what a sadist truly is. This does lack the obsessive edge the previous ones had, but there is still that "she belongs to ME if only in my head" edge. You just need to dust it off and sharpen it.
SO glad she's back.
And ja, cool background.
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Judas made it she makes PRETTY backgrounds.
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Yes she's back
And she hasn't changed, nor will she, as much as the poet would like her to. Perhaps to be hers and hers alone but then if she was, she wouldn't be as aluring so swill that drink and give us more Dixie.
Love the background btw. Nice.
Desiree
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