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is my love not enuf?

its hard for me to move on
when i have u in my mind
its hard for me to love someone new
when i think about u all the time
i dont know if i should wait for you
wait till you grow up
or should i try to find someone new
will we ever again be us?
i want u so bad
i want your love
you have my whole heart
isnt that enuf
what will it take to get you back
everyone tells me we're meant to be together
everyone can see how much i love you thru my eyes
everyone knows
but i cant seem to find
a way to get you to realize
your the only one
who knows me like u do
i miss al our good times
cus your always their to help my get thru
i dont think i can explain how in love i am with u
and the emptiness in my heart
when we're not together
i wish we could be us again

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Written November 30th, 2004

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  • Sarapie
    February 23, 2005
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    wow, that is a great poem, i am goin thru a simalar situation. it sux. i am sorry

  • trinity9
    November 30, 2004
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    This is really good. I hope that things work out for you! I know what its like to be in this situation; and it sucks. I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing.


  • Ilykadothechacha
    November 30, 2004
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    wow... dude this is a really powerful poem! i love it!!! i know how you feel too.. i loved these lines:
    "its hard for me to love someone new
    when i think about u all the time
    i dont know if i should wait for you"

    I LOVE IT! great job dude... dont ever stop writing!
    <3 ya,
    JD


  • LosingSanity4
    November 30, 2004
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    I would spell out the title of your poem because it looks much better and its easier to understand, also in your writing it isnt recomended. Great poetic sense.