I want to dance with you. . .
feel our bodies swaying
as the band is playing
our favorite love song.
I want to sing with you. . .
hear our voices blend,
laugh as we pretend
we're virtuosos.
I want to live with you. . .
as the years go rolling by,
we'll achieve a natural high
inhaling one another.
Author notes
Written August 10th, 2002
In a list
A contest entry
- ~*::*~Sappy~*::*~LOVE~*::*~Poems~*::*~ by mascararunning.
300 points, ended September 24, 2004, 63 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow
love the imagery...especially the last line...gorgeous write
thanx for sharing
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Thanks a lot!
I appreciate your comment!
<3 Maureen
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this is soooo sweet....so sweet.
Great job
and thanks fer entering
Toodles, Danielle
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good
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Thank you, Damon! I look forward to your wonderful comments!
Your friend,
< 3 Maureen
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Your husband is a very lucky man to have you write all these love poems for him. I love reading your poetry. You have become one of my favorites here. I have several favorites, but you are right up there at the top. Thank you for a most wonderful read.
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Thank you, Sister Susan,
Angela and Marie! I LOVE the music! Also changed the pic'...wanted to share it...SO GLAD you all enjoyed it as much as I did!!! Oh yes, and I'm happy you liked the poem! *big smile*
<3 Maureen
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beautifully written so don\'t change it at al
wow, this is perfect in rhyme and everything. absolutely supurb. i really do feel like i'm kind of floating and swaying in tune with the music and voices. i love music, and i especcially love this poem
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'We'll achieve a natural high
Inhaling one another. '
The music truly brings this piece to life, Maureen. There is smeting so magical about shring a dance. I feel like I'm floating on a cloud!
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don\'t touch it ~~~~
I love the whole poem the song & the music ah the music
Everything about it
Love ya sis
Susan
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Thank you, Tina! :-)
I love this song, Jacqueline, and I do think it's a pity that we are not allowed to add music to our poems. I'm still hoping that will change in the future. :-) -
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very pretty Maureen ~:-) -
Glad you liked it, artis! I really appreciate your comment!
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excellent
a trilogy of neat things to do for the rest of two lives, three plus two equals give me five on the suggestive plans....artis -
Thanks for visiting, Barb! I liked your comment. Dancing does wonders for the spirit! Glad you liked the pic'!
:-) Maureen -
excellent
Lovely poem Maureen, i love that feeling of the beating heart and expectancy you get when you dance..and good choice of pic, i have several of his in my house.. -
Thank you, Sprite! I appreciate your comment! Thanks for stopping by! :-)
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excellent
The scent of love and the beloved is always rapture in itself. Lovely thoughts, maureen. -
Thank you, David. :-)
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excellent
Sweet wonderful love poem...I admire your spirit. -
:-) I will when I can! Thanks for reading and commenting, Kyattaman!
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excellent
Dance away, Maureen. -
Thank you for your very nice comment, Jacqueline! I always enjoy your visits!
((HUGS))
Maureen -
Angel Eyes, Your words touched me deeply!!! Thank you from the bottom of my heart!
((HUGS))
Maureen -
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don't touch it!
Such pure sweet love your words spill out onto the page...how precious it sounds....*sigh* you have stunned me with the beauty here...just amazing...I love this piece!! -
Thanks, Claire! It is the best drug! :-)
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Love junkie.
Must be the best drug.
Sweet poem
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Thank you very much, Monk! :-)
Bill, I appreciate your very nice message. :-)
You both made my day!!
*Hugs*
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don't touch it!
Dear, it is so great when the dancing and singing can lead to a togetherness that will last a lifetime. You said this so well in just a few words. Your are a neat person and a very good poet, and I admire your work very much. Hugs Bill. -
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This is a very smooth and wonderful poem. I like your style and I like your mind. Well done.
Monk -
Thanks, Chicken little! Have you ever danced the chicken dance? It's a lot of fun! :-)
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I like to dance too. :)
this is really nice , good job -
Many thanks to all who commented! I love to dance...wish I could dance with all of you! :-)
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don't touch it!
May I have this dance? :) -
don't touch it!
Thanks for the offer, but I don't even know you! -
don't touch it!
lets step to the floor baby!! -
don't touch it!
MMmmmm ... Let's dance!
*smile*
Sammy -
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aww this is nice...
i wanna dance with you.. i cant dance but i hope you can if youre asking someone to dance :) -
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Short and sweet...rare combination in poetry. -
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Maureen this is wonderful..you may not believe this..but I have this pic too..lol..and was thinking of something similar..but I couldn't live up to your write..just beautiful...~~~GILL~~~ -
Woo Baby! Thank you very much! I feel breathless right now myself! :-)
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excellent
This Is very nice. I loved the imagery. This took my breath away. -
Thank you, Fantastix! Nice thing to say! Sweet Dreams!!! :-)
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I do love how you wrote this. It's like taking in the sweetest breath...and now I am ready for bed. :) -
Hey Mike, :-) Glad to see you again! I loved your comment!
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Thank you, WaryDreamer (M.), Rubee and Connie. I really appreciate your nice comments!!! :-))
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Very nice Maureen, a beautiful piece about our need and love of companionship.
Mike -
Rubee: This is so sweet Maureen!!!! It's so wonderful to have someone you love to grow old with...and to dance with...a very lovely and touching write!! :))
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Zinsser: This is very nice..... Hope your dreams come true....
~~ Connie ~~
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don't touch it!
Dance away, Maureen...every chance you get. Sometimes, the music ends much too soon. :`(
Beautiful words.
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Glad you liked it, Chris!!! :-) Love your enthusiasm!
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excellent
Oh wow - get it on sister!!!
Dance the night away ...feel that body sway ...
Yeah ! Makes me want to get out the threads and kick up some dust !!! :-) - nice poem Maureen!!!
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