Novas
form a
radiant
sight
creating
a luminous
cloud
that
glimmers
so bright
while it
falls
down
to Earth
amidst
brilliant
streaks
of light
my eyes
become
captivated
upon this
wondrous
heavenly
sight
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Written November 30th, 2004
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I love shooting stars and I love this poem. You did an amazing job. Keep up the awesome work.
love always and forever, your ap daughter,
aka:marissa rae
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Thank you Marissa, your comment was so nice and brought a smile this morning. You take care and bless you. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Mom
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Thank you for your lovely comment. This was my first attempt at this style of poem. I appreciate your encouraging words. I hope all is well with you and your family. I am glad to hear you enjoyed the Thanksgiving holiday. My was wonderful too. God Bless you. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you so much Ann, this was my first attempt at this stlys of poem. Thank you for the encouraging words. I hope your son enjyts it. Take care, God Bless Sandy
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Beautiful!!!
MoonChild55,
Your new poem,"Shooting Stars," was beautiful in its format and imagery.This poem may be different in style but it's just as wonderful in conveying a picture of a shooting star.When I was a child I lived in Pennsylvania.I can't remember if it was NewHope,Pa. or Lambertville,Pa..This poem took me back to that time in my life.My sister and I watched a beautiful shooting star one night...it turned out to be a meteor and it actually landed in a field close to my house.Thanks for reminding me of that night.My prayers and thoughts are with you and yours always. -
excellent
Oh Sandy had to read this before I went to bed, caught my eye! Yes, oh I love it! Love anything to do with the night sky, my son is a big science buff, so we are always checking out the stars and formations at curtin times of the year, it's very clear here in the country, always seeing a shooting star, then I saw this about Novas, this is so great! Want to make a copy of this, my son would love it too! Beautiful, beautiful write, it will "win"...Wins in my book, you amaze me...so smooth, how do you do it! Well a nice way to end my night, just got back from swim practice, so we are off to bed. Thanks Sandy for the great write, you are such a joy! Ann 
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Thank you Steff, this was such a nice comment. You always make me smile. Take care, Sandy
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I'm glad you liked it. It's my first one in this form. Take care my friend. I thank you for your aweet comment. God Bless, Sandy
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Thank you so much Tamara, I am glad you liked this poem. Take care and God bless Sandy
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Thank you for the nice comment. I appreciate it. This is a great contest. Take care, Sandy
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good job
I love the rhyming. good job!! -
As pozo said, differnt form than normal, but never the less, i loved it very very much. I love the stars, and I love how you described them!!!
Another wonderful piece -
This is a different form but I loved it. I liked the shape of this poem and the amazing way you wrote it- a great piece of freeverse from my favourite writer
This was an excellent poem, good luck in the contest,
All the best,
Pozo
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cheers
I do enjoy the stars as well as you describe them here
/f Tamara
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