What is this
this place I have heard of
Does it exist
Will it Soothe my pain
Can it erase the past
To fill your mind with fantasy
Heal my wounds
My heart
My Bleeding Soul
Fixing everything Broken
Restoring the Banished Serenity
To its throne
To simplify Reality
Returning that which was lost
Author notes
this is an old piece i wrote that i fianlly found and got the time to post i hope u ppl enjoy its magic lol
Written November 30th, 2004
What did you think
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Its very poetic!! I so like it!
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very.. poetic. Romanticised and loaded words, I also like how the title is the subject, but it isn't mentioned in the poem.. I really like this one.
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Great read yet again, lots of emotion within the lines of this one.
Nicely done
Keep them coming
Em
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perfect my dear i love this piece just as i love all of you will you be my eveything master shadow
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Hey I kinna like this...
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thism is really good
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hey, this is really good, i like it
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Beautiful poem hun.
. I espically liked the part where you said
"Heal my wounds
My heart
My Bleeding Soul"
Good job on writing this poem, hope to see more
*Brandy* -
Well this is a great one to post maybe it will sper you on and give you more to write.
Heal my wounds
My heart
My Bleeding Soul
Fixing everything Broken
A fantasy that something like sleep can fix something and make it like it once was the truth is your soul will always be bleeding and your heart will always be broken. The simple fact is that that what makes it so beautiful but the simple idea that it could be fixed makes us hope for something more and despite that we know it wont happen but we continue to hope. For hope guides us and it might not be much but its better then fearing what could happen instead... Keep writing keep dreaming and the works will keep appearing... ~Dragonia~ -
Kewlz
When i read this its like , its all read in one breath. Anyway, likes it. Well done -
Great Read!!
Vincent-Shadow I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. It was a great read. kntryg -
I found this to be an excellent poem
But I do think you meant sooth to be soothe
I like the line Banished Serenity
Enjoyed this read a lot
Hugs
Susan~~~
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