Ripping and pulling at my hair
The sounds that break the air
I cannot bear to stand further
Wanting to scream,
Scream until my voice gives away and becomes nothing but a forgotten whisper
I want to break the strings that tie me down
Crawl away from this place
Take the first steps into independence
Find my own sense of place
Do not get me wrong
I cherish the zone I possess now
Hanging onto the only place I have that I can truly call MINE
It has been like a security blanket for so long
It's almost all I know
My zone,
The only place secluded from the madness
Only vicinity, which I can hold onto my sanity
The only space to hide all the wonders of me
Where I can show my true colors and no is there to judge
All my innermost thoughts and secrets are held here
Various reflection notebooks and stars
Sentiments, gifts, toys, valuables, trinkets, notes, stuffed wonders and knowledge
Coinciding in one small area
Wishing to get away so desperately
But I have yet to find a suitable way to leave
My home, my place, my turf
The place I lay at rest at night
Forever grateful that I got the chance to live here
~Sarah VanderWende ©2004~
Author notes
I dunno this is maybe a well worded rant...I dunno if I like it that much...Hm..I dunno tell me what you people think, looking for some comments..want to know what you people think..that's what this site is for anyways right?
So if you read it, please leave comments 
It would be much appreciated
Written November 29th, 2004
What did you think
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Hehe thank you Glad to have my space back now
Thanks for the comment.
*Sarah* -
Excellent write, you should be very proud to have your own little place that you can call home, we are never truly happy until we are satisfied but having a place to call home is a very good start
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Thank you very much for the compliment I will be sure to return the favor and comment on a few of your pieces.
*Sarah* -
wow, the emotion in this piece is powerful and its always best to find your own place to be yourself. i like this piece very much
DarkAngelLady
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Thank you hehe yes major senioritis
lol
*Sarah* -
I think all of us that are seniors in school are ready to get away, nice poem i really liked it
Jared -
Thanks!!
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Thanks I will look at your work when I get some free time I'll return the comment as well =)
*Sarah* -
EXCELLENT!!!
WhOa! By far one of the best poems i have read! Check out my poems sometime if you get a chance. so just.... im unspoken...
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