The friendship lasted for far too many years,
relizing we were diferrent, but not wanting to see clear
we both knew it was over and done
we just couldn't give up on the one we loved
I still don't wanna give up even to this day
when she said it was the end, the end oh yay
she knew what I would do and knew what I would say
She knew I had to win
and she gave it to me, so i could have my way
She knows me better than anyone in the whole entire world
I miss her now more than ever, I still love that girl
She was there for me when no one was, She stuck be me through thick and thin, She is my Chelle and forever will be
No one could love and care for that girl more than me
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I still love you Michelle, even if we are fighting, and even if ou hate me, I still and will always be there for you if you ever need me.
Written November 29th, 2004
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Oh wow this is great..I think we all have that one friend that is so special to us that we lose contact with or not on best of terms with..you just can't forget the good times and the times they held you up..you have described this all so wonderfully and I wish you the best..
thank you for your comment on my write and I have added you to my favorites as well...
~Kristy -
good job...:\
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Has great Potential
Hi, You provided the reader with a good view of the narrator's distraught sense of the break up, focusing on some valid positives of the person and that helps the reader relate to the narrators loss.
Some minor spelling corrections will help, such as in L2, 'realizing' and different. Another idea might be to weed out some of the 'she's' You have many and it becomes repetitious, which could bore the reader and keep them from the enjoyment of understanding the pleas and hopes at the end.
Best Of Luck, Liz
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