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I'll ignore my pain, it's not like you knew.
I'll ignore my hurt because your suffering too.
I'll ignore my confusion and aching heart, because your the one who needs the support and it's time for me to start.
I'll ignore the questions running through my head, the screams that shake me as I lay in bed.
I'll ignore the tears that pool down my face, the words so packedin my memory that there is no empty space.

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Written November 29th, 2004

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  • Hectic Michelle
    February 23, 2006
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  • cutie55
    January 16, 2005
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    This is really good! my faovrite part is this:
    I'll ignore the questions running through my head, the screams that shake me as I lay in bed.
    I'll ignore the tears that pool down my face, the words so packedin my memory that there is no empty space.

    Thats exacly how I feel sometimes (like last night) lol!! Anywayz, great job!
    Mandi


  • DreAmR07
    January 4, 2005
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    that comment was a bit harsh and i dont agree... i think you did good.

    I'll ignore the questions running through my head, the screams that shake me as I lay in bed.

    that was my favorite line... that line was powerful and impacting..if thats a word lol.. anyway good job.. peace out DreamR


  • December 2, 2004
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    you sound like a little fat girl who know one loves. you need to find a new hobby.

  • pain4lifedeath
    November 29, 2004
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    I'm not good at all writing comments but your a really good writer keep it up.

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