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Come Claim Your Prize

Sexual fantasies discovered
Carnal desires satisfied
Lust

Synchronized minds
Morbid thoughts orally published
Secrets

Tangible attraction
Ceaselessly stimulated
Love

Identical twins
Impatient incest
Corruption

Come claim your prize.

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Written November 29th, 2004

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  • violettak
    December 14, 2004
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    excellent use of vocabulary

    I agree with everyone else - I LOVE your choice of words in this piece. You can say so much in a smaller space when you can express yourself in such a way. My boyfriend writes like that and I am always amazed. Good write!

  • Muddy Wormwood
    December 13, 2004
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    I like this poem alot... I don't know why...


  • Boe
    December 7, 2004
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    The use of words in this piece were great. For this being a short poem it explains a lot and has a lot of meaning to it. Very well done. Keep it up!

    ~Cherie


  • Exo
    November 29, 2004
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    Great Poem! I loved the vocabulary(words) you used..my favorite part is :
    Identical twins
    Impatient incest
    Corruption

    Keep it up!

    -nicci-your bitch