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The Car-Wash--by Joseph Smith

When I was young
 The scariest thing was the car-wash.
The big bristles
 Attacking!  Attacking!
"I'm going to drown," I thought.
 But when it's said and done,
It's just a car-wash
 That washes your car.

Author notes

This is not one of my poems!!!  A guy named Joseph Smith in the youth group at my Church shared it with me.  He wrote it for school, and thought I would like it, so I thought I would share it with everyone on here.  Personally, I thought it was funny, and cool.
Written November 27th, 2004

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  • Tabitha-Robin
    April 25, 2007

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    Wow this is really good. Keep penning my friend. God bless you in all that you do.

    IN Christ Jesus,

    Tabith


  • josh-13
    December 10, 2004
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    This is funnie. I like it. josh