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Beauty.

To the eyes of a person.
They never truely see what
they offer to everybody.

In the eyes of a Hero.
There is bravery and courage.
In the eyes of a child.
There is innocents and trust.
In the eyes of a friend that
seems like nothing.
But in the eyes of you.
I magically had you start
believing in something.
Something you thought was
never true.

Something you thought.
No one would ever say to
you. I've told you before.
And I'll tell you again.
You truely are beautiful.

The beauty that is in you.
Is not only skin deep.
The beauty that you hold.
I hope you soon decide to release.

Your natural beauty is inside you.

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Written November 26th, 2004

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  • PURPLExxTEARS
    August 7, 2005
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    I LOVE THIS POEM!!!! duh!
    This is such an awesome poem! I love it! You are such a good writer! so never stop writing! duh!
    check out some of my poems if you get the chance! I would really appreciate it!

    <3


  • Seven Kinky
    January 13, 2005
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    I hope you know I'm going to make you have an unfortunate fall down the stairs if you don't drop it. Sorry to be having this convo on your page, budday. My NOSEY SISTER (yes, that's right...you ARE nosy) doesn't know when to leave well enough alone.

    P.S. You just leave my hole alone! I'll bury you in here if you don't find another pastime than trying to humiliate me! And I'll have you know I was playing hide and seek with Rainy. BAM, MO' SUCKA!! Now leave Nathan alone and shut up about G3...or you WILL be getting a visit tonight. *Macabre laugh* Yes...from the closet!


  • Trapped Rage
    January 13, 2005
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    Running away now

    Haha...I found him! It was too easy. Ow!! Why'd you throw that shoe at me?! There's no need to be embarrassed. We're all adults...kind of. Heheheeee...*school-girl squeal* *clears throat* Yes, NATHAN, do ignore me. I'm just the, uh... *checks above message*...nosy sister.(Not) Byyyyyyyyye.
    PS-Get out of that hole, KK. Don't be a sissy. He probably just thinks I'm crazy...in a bad way.

  • Seven Kinky
    January 12, 2005
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    *Glares* Nathan, please don't pay any heed to my nosy sister. *Sigh* If you'll excuse me, I'm going to find a dark hole to hide in now. Lata...

  • Trapped Rage
    January 12, 2005
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    Got ya. (don't ask)

    That was...so sweet!! I'm so glad you feel that way about my big sis. She needed this. She IS beautiful. I'm glad you could see that. Thanks, darlin'. -Amanda

  • Seven Kinky
    November 26, 2004
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    Ayo budday. *Sniffle* I pretty much said it all on muh author page, but...yeah, this was wonderfully written (despite the fact that it's about me). Thanks much.

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