He'll make you retch
His drawers are full
He's got the stench
Dare cross his path no time to lull
Baby'll make you clean the trench
Author notes
I was just in a silly mood. Don't light a match!
Kudos if you got past the title. It was an exercise in shifting perspective for me to write the title.
Written November 26th, 2004
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lol, Thank you for the smile, I was in a silly mood too...
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Thanks, RFR
Yeah, it was pretty juvenile. Not sure what got into me that day. It doesn't have much balance or cohesiveness, but it has a cute moment for a parent that just finished dealing with this sort of thing. LOL! Thanks for reading older work I've done. I try to do that for people, too.
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funni
! Classic sh...wait..lmao
Let me restart that
Classic write mate !
Love the little baby kicking !
Great write !
Stay safe -
Very funny
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The stench of a full diaper...
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..Call me niave and such, but i don't get it =S
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A full trench and the stench and can do one in. A killer for sure
Wait til you start changing your own diapers 
Not that I know but it's what i've heard 
Enjoyed!
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LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ET nice to see you in a silly mood, and equally nice to see a whimsical little diddy by you too!
You can't be all seriousness all of the time you know, besides you have quite the devilsh silly side you know!
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great poem. Funny, short, simple, and outstading!!!! Keep up the great work.
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of course i read it....lol....cute......
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Very funny and I admit I almost didn't read...Helen
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mmm smelly pants eh?! yuk
but a good reflection lol!
elaine
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Very Good
I must admit, I almost did not read it. I am glad I did. It is funny. Too much "humor" in here is not. It is good to find something actually funny. Thank you for sharing. -
He he I got past the title and got a good giggle.... needed that too.
Funny
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hahahahaha this is good. i myself enjoy the comic stand now and again. really cool way of puttin it man
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