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Kiss the Kiss

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Years lay behind them sooooo cautiously planned
Structured painstakingly like commercial Hershey's Kisses
They surrendered their passion to function
When love became a cold statuette

But I feel the love within its in·an·i·mate·ness
Because someone believes irony is for fools
Do you remember that day?
Me…I recall kissing your scars…with unfeigned love

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This is about letting the inner spirit free, and perhaps a commentary against what society expects of us.
Written November 26th, 2004

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  • Timothy Cameron gold member
    November 26, 2004
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    Impossible...but if he believed it, who am I to get between him and his target...I ain't the one. LOL!


  • Nyx Iscariot
    November 26, 2004
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    Actually, Aphrodite brought her to life, because he loved it so much...

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    Edited on Nov 26, 1:38 p.m. because ''.


  • Timothy Cameron gold member
    November 26, 2004
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    I thought of that...but he brought it to live like some people believe porno movies are sexy (just my personal opinion and I ain't one to judge anybody, but the real thing does MORE for me). However, naked pictures of something I can sink myself into...now that's different. Something partially wrapped in an Afghan with mounds and electric fuzz showing...oh yes...LOL!

  • Nyx Iscariot
    November 26, 2004
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    Pygmalion loved a statue.


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