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Eternity's Seed

Everybody has a dream
May it be a passing moment
Or forever part of thee
No limits to a wish’s diversity
For it may be as black as the night
Or as peaceful as a morning sky

Mine shall be given unto thine purest of souls
I bestow my deference
For me
I keep an inner lusting desire
For thee
My love shall never be a fading moment
Everyday a blooming dream
Grows from eternity’s seed

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Written November 25th, 2004

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  • ThineIX
    December 30, 2004
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    Thankyou. I'm looking through your poems right now.


  • Alahmorah
    December 30, 2004
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    Love it!

    This is my favorite one so far!!!


  • inferno romance
    November 25, 2004
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    wow thats deep its really good