Today, I saw you
you were all dressed up
but I thought you were the same
i don't think you saw me at first
or maybe you did, but ignored me
i don't know
i thought you were still the same
so i sat way behind you
about 10 rows back
i watched the back or your head
the way the lights shined on your hair
longed to touch it
do you remember when you used to let me?
aren't you still the same?
do you remember
that we were together?
something has changed you
you aren't the same person anymore
i miss the old you
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Written November 25th, 2004
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This is a great read, sometimes we think that the person has changed but it makes me wonder if maybe we didnt really know the person to begin with. Really liked this
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I love this poem. Keep up the good work, you are a brilliant poet from what I have read. * Jade* XXX
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interesting how it shifted in this poem. it was calm and almost like i was following your thoughts.
~avertediyes -
You know when this happens to me, I wonder if I ever saw the real them. I don't trust my feelings sometimes, I use to but lately I find myself doubting me.
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i can really relate to this, even the subtle shyness on your part to approach the different person that seems the same, great write, simple but great nonetheless... keep on writing... penumbrapoet
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Blah.. sometimes change is a pain in the @$$... Sometimes it's for the good. Sometimes it's not. Great job, I enjoyed it alot and the flow was great! Awesome way to write your emotions!
-Sarah -
This is a really really great poem! It has alot of meaning for me because of I have been through alot in the past few days , so i really enjoyed your poem. keep up the good work!
~no1special~ -
Change.... So many people don't understand it- don't accept it. I understand that when things like this happen. You penned your thoughts and emotions beautifully. Well written!
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