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Am I...

Am I ready for you to be
the "sunshine" in my life.

If I don't take this chance
now. Your love may never
pass by me again.

Am I ready to experience
life with you right now.

If I don't take this chance
now. Your love may never
pass by me again.

Am I ready for you and I..

I don't know !

But, if I don't take this
chance now. I will never know.

If I don't act now on how I
feel. What we could have will
never grow.

I am ready !

I am as ready as could be to
capture this love you have
waiting for me.


Yvonne J. Griffin
08/08/02

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"mmmmmmmm"
Written August 8th, 2002

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  • spinkycleft
    November 11, 2002
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    Lovely :) You capture the nauseating doubt!


  • Rubee
    September 5, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    aww this is sweet...I hope you took the chance..love doesn't often come by, so we just have to go for it...wonderfully touching!! :)


  • mtpoet
    August 19, 2002
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    neutral

    A strong, commital voice...


  • Manicmuze
    August 8, 2002
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    excellent

    i think we are always ready for love... we just tell ourselves we're not... they say if you wait til you're 'ready' to have kids, you'll never have them... I like your poem, lots of contemplation here. Nicely done :-))