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Through Trials and Tribulations

Through trials and tribulations
We always seem to grow
Sometimes we think God has left us
But in our hearts we know

That He is right beside us
And He will guide us through
As you must remember
He gave His Son for you

So when your day seems dreary
And depression steps inside
Just open up to Jesus
And it will run and hide

When your pain is too much to bare
And you feel you want to cry
Just turn your face toward heaven
And let Jesus wipe your eyes

Through trials and tribulations
You never have to fear
For in your heart is Jesus
And He truly loves you dear


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Written November 24th, 2004

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  • DefinitiveFreak silver member
    April 17, 2005
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    Yeah, I know that's true, but I find it so hard to turn to Him. It hurts so much, stupid pride. I have cried out before, my poem Confession of the Fallen is evidence to that. sigh Thank you for entering this in my contest.


  • SoulScythe
    December 27, 2004
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    Jesus tried to rape me...


  • mendee86
    December 16, 2004
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    Gorgeous poem with an amazing rhyme scheme and it's true, when I'm going through rough times I should simply fall to my knees and let Him hold me tight, but man, sometimes that can be incredibly hard. Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest and good luck!


  • leannewales
    December 16, 2004
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    in the fourth stanza i think "bare" should be "bear"....this is one of the most beautiful writes i have read in a long time...it is so hopeful and uplifting that it cannot fail to give comfort...i may not have seen you for a while Bertie...but you haven't lost that magic touch....hugs...leanne xxxx


  • lilbitsassy
    December 3, 2004
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    Awesome

    This was definitely a very beautiful write and I agree it came from your heart. I have never read any of your work before now but after reading this piece I will definitely have to check you out more. Good luck in the contest. You really did a great job with this write.Alexis


  • theDARK1 gold member
    November 25, 2004
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    bertie, what a heartfelt write of emotion and encouragement. this is so wonderful and i appreciate you in so many ways. happy turkey day, luvya, DARK.


  • aslanlight
    November 25, 2004
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    moving

    That poem is so moving, I nearly shed a tear because you're right about Jesus always being there even when we feel like he isn't. Thanks so much for writing it!


  • budlem
    November 25, 2004
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    Greatly done Bertie. You always have a way of connecting with your friends and saying just what needs to be heard by that person. Thanks for sharing this with us. ~Bud~

  • Wordpainter
    November 25, 2004
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    Incredible! soul touching

    This is so beautiful I can tell it came straight from your heart and i know it shows your love for Christ and truly are thankful God gave His son just for you and me, and all the rest of His children No grater love will there ever be! si you not only touch my heart with your poems but you also touch my soul! I love you very much and I am so thankful to God He made you my sister!! LOVE YOU!!

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