There once was a "sea dog" called "stoner"
whose hair was in need of a toner
His giggle and girth
shook his belly with mirth
so he'll never end up as a loner...
Author notes
Please dont take offense at this "Ditty" ....nothing personal ..
Commented on allpoetry.com/Poem/900160
Written November 24th, 2004
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A contest entry
- Please Help Rename 'stonedsince1972' by M.A.King.
350 points, ended November 25, 2004, 5 entries
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Many thanks John. I really have fun writing these....should come naturally.. but sadly does not I have to work at them but have a chuckle when doing so . I am obligued for your help.
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I just started writing limericks a short time ago and still haven’t found my niche in them yet. You did a great job with this, but I would recommend going back a checking out your second line. I believe you meant “Whose” in that one. Other than that, this was really well done.
~ John
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Thanks Mary
Just hope he doesnt bear malace hehe
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oh my goodness! another one that is just too cute and funny. you chose the right form...he is a limerick kind a guy. a wonderful entry
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Thank you I really enjoyed writing this one, made a nice change
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This is cute...How could anyone be offended? I never do well at humor...I am glad other people write it for me to read...Good luck in the contest!
Victoria Lin -
Thanks Kayla had great fun writing it
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Dude! lmao! This is so funny. Short, but funny none the less. I loved it.
-Kayla -
Lol, hope you were not offended It was meant in fun
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This is very cool,I LOVE LIMERICKS!
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