Happy Birthday AppyAngel!

by Gregg Rowe

Happy Birthday to AppyAngel
Who is turning twenty-eight
I hope that all your dreams come true
To have a child, find a mate
Until that day happens, dear one
Enjoy today and eat your bloody cake!

AppyAngel is turning twenty-seven
Oh, dear, it seems I made a mistake
It really gives her an extra year
To find this special mate
Yet, it doesn't take away the fact
That she still deserves this chocolate cake!

Author notes

Okay, I know that this contest ws not suppose to be serious and the original stanza was a combination of what she wrote on the contest page and then going to her home page. It was the IM that I recieved from her saying that she is turning twenty-seven that I had to add the second stanza! Gregg
Written November 24th, 2004

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24 hour contest - Birthday Blues by Appyangel. 300 points, ended November 26, 2004, 11 entries
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November 24, 2004
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This was great even though you got her age wrong . That is okay though since you made it up to her in the second stanza. You are a wonderful writer hun. Jody
November 24, 2004
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Gregg You got her age wrong Silly oh well the second stanza was comical it made the poem even better. So I guess the mistake overall helped the poem into something humerous and wonderful as always. Good to hear from ya

~~Rosey
lordoftherings
November 24, 2004
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AppyAngel: My dear apologies about your age, when I looked on your home page the age said twenty-seven so I figured you were turning twenty-eight so I am going to revise it a bit. Gregg
Edited on Nov 24, 11:08 because ''.
Appyangel
November 24, 2004
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27 actually

great poem though