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Whispered Dreams



this silent love, flows gently free
drifts through blue skies, speaks to the sea
each heart-string strums Love's melody
from visions tossed in my memory
I feel a caress, of happiness
from times before, when pain was less
I stop to sniff a rose's scent
and realize how my life was spent
longing love from yesteryears
as I cross the paths of sorrow's tears
and still hope fills my tender soul
while this silent love unfolds



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Thanks for reading me, much love, Timothy~

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  • Pyper Rain gold member
    September 7, 2007

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    from visions tossed in my memory
    I feel a caress, of happiness
    from times before, when pain was less

    Time, distance and space matter not, we hear loves whisper guiding us, to where love lives...within, where it has been all along.

    A gentle, loving write.

    ~B.


  • blueangel4u
    December 6, 2004
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    Amazing Write!

    All your work amazes me, thanks for sharing your talent here!
    As you tell me, please pen on, and keep up the great works!



    blueangel4u

  • alainasarkar
    November 29, 2004
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    best poem ever

    it is a good poem. very deep from the soul. maybe one day you may be another shakespeare.

  • Broken-Bones
    November 29, 2004
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    really beautiful , i really love this poem , its ... well its so sweet , a bit of hope with a bit of pain and lots of beautiful images , brilliantly written
    Jordan


  • Oleander
    November 29, 2004
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    This was really cool. It has something to it.


  • November 29, 2004
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    This is cute


  • Aimee Hill
    November 26, 2004
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    Beautiful....simply beautiful...just like all your writes, your heart pours out into the words you pen. Wonderful job on this one, Timothy... I really loved reading this one. Keep them coming, for I love reading

    ~Aimee


  • Sandygram silver member
    November 24, 2004
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    BEAUTIFUL POEM

    This was simply beautiful. What more can I say. Thank you for sharing this wonderful heatfelt poem. Take care, Sandy :0


  • Danna Hobart
    November 24, 2004
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    Promise me that you will never write for Hallmark, Timothy, because a young woman would not stand a chance if some unscrupulous boy gave her a card with this beautiful poem on it.


  • Dishy
    November 24, 2004
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    This is so well written and flowed lovely and was presented lovely too .I just thought it was fantastic well done


  • Abel
    November 24, 2004
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    Very well done...love is something that unfolds slowly...like the petals of a rose...you may notice it's scent long before the actual beauty of the bloom...it's like the warm letting go of spring...and the cold holding on of winter...great write my friend....thanx for sharing..Peace Abel

  • VisionMuse
    November 24, 2004
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    Great melodic flow * Loved this >Thanks for sharing.

    Leaf.

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