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Stare

i stare at the cracks in the wall
and the wall is a mirror
but i have no face to reflect

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Written November 23rd, 2004

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  • poltroon
    December 28, 2004
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    i have found ,on reading your writing, that it holds a sadness to it. it portrays something hollow and dim, but it's done well, in a docile exuberance.
    sometimes simplicity compensates for thought... meaning, this poem (short as it is) is saying so much without using words as restrictions.
    i really like this a lot actually.
    ~fond regards
    leah

  • Kef
    November 23, 2004
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    Short and sweet, I really don't know what to say, but, "WOW" I was actually thinking that today. This was great.