A wondrous night...of this couple's lust.
As their passion melts this night-time frost.
A thing which shall bring them still closer, than before...
Her longing...Her lust...strong as waves battering the sea-side's shore..
But he loves her more than he'd let her know...
So away...He holds her crying from afar..this dark princess of snow.
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Written November 23rd, 2004
A contest entry
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300 points, ended December 2, 2004, 3 entries
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Is it in caps? I cant find it lol
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...hmmmm *hint* look for your name again..
*smiles a bit*
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WOW! the second part is even better! I like really dotn know what to say.. for once lol... I loved it though! hehe thanks so much for entering
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...Right part 2...So...try now to see what you may.
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