All of the lies you constantly tell
Make me want to shoot you
All you do is hurt everyone around you
It makes me want to kill you
Everything you say is poison
Everything you say is pain
Your lies eat away the flesh of my control
And makes me want to lash out at you
Your lies make me hate you
I've lost all respect and love for you
I only wish for you to die now
That's all you really deserve
These lies will gnaw at me
Until I finally take a knife to your throat
And spill all of the warm juice
That enable you to talk, breathe and live
Then our lives will finally be pure
You won't make him cry and hurt anymore
Things will be better than before
Your poison won't kill us anymore
You'll be dead
Your poison will be what kills you
Lies are death
Lies come back to haunt you
You will be your own downfall
Author notes
I took it out of the contest, but it won bronze.
allpoetry.com/Contest/910009
Written November 23rd, 2004
A contest entry
- Calling all Trophy Winners! by withdrawal.
300 points, ended March 31, 2005, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Thank you for taking the time to comment. I'm glad you liked and understood it. Good luck with judging.
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I don't know what the person above was saying...it made sense, perfectly. I guess too many people have feelings of murder in their hearts-really worng but it comes and fights and sometimes consumes.
Great write!
~Jen Thanx for entering! -
this is a great poem...jus a question about the line "That enable you to talk, breathe and live" y didn;'t u write enables instead?... and yea its great kinda didn't get the part "Lies are death, Lies come back to haunt you" iunno it seems weird maybe if you said lies are dead and they've come back iunno...well it makes sense to you jus not as much as to me.... ummm this really had a feeling to it as if you were really cutting the throat of a person, amazing hmm.........good work....and good luck!!
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Ooooh wow!
This was great. I liked it lots, though it didnt really have a good flow. But it did. But i klearly dont know what im talking about. Thank you for entering, and good luck in my kontest.
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