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somehow

somehow the phone line drops
but i'm still thinking of you
i'm stil thinking
of how i could hear the smile in your voice
of the way you called me "baby"
of the way i just wish you were here with me now
we said good night
but i didnt want to let go
i wanted a few more moments
when there was nothing said
but we both knew
i wonder if you've fallen asleep
i wonder if you're dreaming of me
i just want to hear your voice
somehow i felt at ease
somehow i didnt want to let go
right now the one thing i want
is you to hold me close
stroke my cheek
run your fingers through my hair
and smile at me
and you'd quitely wisper to me
"your beautiful and i love you"
as i melted into your arms
as i smile sweetly
and somehow you've captured me
somehow you've taken me by surprise
was it something you said
was it in your eyes?
you've taken my hand
and held me tight
and somehow i kno that this is right
you make me smile
you make me laugh
you make me me
so stay with me tonight
for i know if i was to dream
i know that it would be of you
but somehow i still wonder
if your dreaming
if your sleeping
if your screaming
if your loveing me too.

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Written November 23rd, 2004

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  • Ame Noire
    December 5, 2004
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    Brooke this is amazing, good job!
    Edited on Dec 05, 11:47 because ''.