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written over cuts and lies

written over cuts and lies
contimplating suicide
dont know which way to go
dont know which way to fly

can i tell you i miss you?
can i say i still care?
will you listin
or are your thoughts bare?

i want things to go back
to the way it was before
i want you to kiss me
again like you did before

i remember your smile
i remember your touch
i remember your love
and i miss it so much

written over cuts and lies
i'm contimplateing suicide
knowing my hear is broken
this night that i died

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Written November 23rd, 2004

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  • CrimsonMist
    November 23, 2004
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    wow!!!! that was really good! great job!!!!!!!! i loved it! keep it up!

    ~Jessi~

  • shootingstars
    November 23, 2004
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    'if you are thinking abvout killing yourself, please reconsider everything. its not the best way to leave this world. my best friend just got checked into a mental hospital for being suicidal. i cry over it now. im depressed. dont do this to the people around you. even if you do not think so, they care about you very very very much. it hurts me way to much to see people do this to themselves. ive tried to commit suicidde aa cpl times now. then i stopped to think. there was a voice somewheerthat told me that i was needed in this world and that i have a place in this world. please reconsider.'