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Heartfelt Love

You will always have a
place in my heart, for
as long as I live.

Whether we make something
of our friendship or not.

You will always have
a place in my heart.

If we ever lose contact
with each other.

Your image will stay
with me for the rest
of my life.

Because..

You will always have
a place in my heart.

Yvonne J. Griffin
08/07/02

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Written August 7th, 2002

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  • confusedlover
    September 14, 2003
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    very nice piece... i can definitley relate to you... nice expressions

  • Cwm
    August 29, 2003
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    This is how break-ups should end(if this was about a break up) you have a wonderful heart..it's takes a mature underdstanding person...to come to the terms that you've taken..



    ~CWM~


  • poetryality silver member
    August 19, 2003
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    Great!

    I have imges of many who have gone on their way either in passing or in journey. This was beautiful. Thanks for your comments on the featured poem. Just a little something for everyone, on either side. I like being in the middle on this one. lol Safe drive home.

    Peace---------------------------------------------->POetryality


  • Almighty Aphrodite gold member
    August 1, 2003
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    nobel prize winner

    I *heart* this poem! It is so sweet... and sentimental, especially at the part where you say:

    "If we ever lose contact
    with each other.

    Your image will stay
    with me for the rest
    of my life."

    There is a friend of mine whose image is always in my head... I haven't been able to contact him in a while, but I wonder if he still thinks of me like I think of him...you did great with this one. Never stop writing!

    Many blessings,

    Raven Aurora


  • Rubee
    September 5, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    beautiful sentiments!! I know exactly what you mean here..wonderfully expressed!! :))


  • Manicmuze
    August 7, 2002
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    excellent

    Lovely thoughts... nicely done :-)

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