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The Making of the Infinite.

Intellect, shall cross paths with Darkness' love.
Having the disdain to martyr, the hell of heaven above.
Angels screaming singing lustful spite...
This breeding of the Love-Lust destruction tonight.
Eternally grappling, sealed in their own kist.
Ubiquitous,omega and alpha...unbriefed by their tryst.




~just having a little fun~

Author notes

Can you see this obvious pattern...?
Written November 22nd, 2004

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  • chimericalhope
    November 23, 2004
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    thanks


  • chimericalhope
    November 23, 2004
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    if that makes ur pickle tickle


  • Corpse-Groom
    November 23, 2004
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    Well ... You sure...how bout an applause then..


  • chimericalhope
    November 23, 2004
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    damn...


    hmmm....

    you wrote i hate u ooh yah but i dont want any points u gave tomany hints

  • Corpse-Groom
    November 23, 2004
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    ...Actually unbriefed is a word it means 'kept in the dark'

    ...try again... dont worry about my spelling or word constructs * i check them for errors so i try not to have any errors b4 i put them up*...It spells out something. *hint*


  • chimericalhope
    November 23, 2004
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    unbreifed isnt a word... do i win the prize?


  • Corpse-Groom
    November 22, 2004
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    ....nah thats too little...how about 35 pts....?*hmmmmmmm*

  • Corpse-Groom
    November 22, 2004
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    Did you notice anything else...about it...? Spelling anything....*whistles...*

    Ten points for anyone who sees this certain thing....


  • November 22, 2004
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    This was amazing.. I loved it.. I'm speechless really.. great write..

  • chimericalhope
    November 22, 2004
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    i love the fact that u make everything seem so dark torment the hellish heaven that lies above us
    i loved it HOTT scribe

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