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Playtime

Naïve little mouse
The kittens pouncing practice
Good morning playtime

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Written November 22nd, 2004

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  • amberline
    January 10, 2005
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    a cute poem.


  • Samplette gold member
    November 30, 2004
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    Poor little mouse, no good morning for him...still this brought a smile to my face...lol Nice haiku.
    Sam


  • FifthDove
    November 30, 2004
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    lol, or is it good bye Naïve little mouse!!!
    Very cute and humorous ku

    Cindy

  • Butterfly Blush
    November 22, 2004
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    what a humorous little piece. i could picture the playful kitten.
    Naïve little mouse
    The kittens pouncing practice
    Good morning playtime
    Brilliant work.