I like you
I want you in my life
Never imagined a man could look as beautiful as you
I wonder what it would feel like to be held in your arms
I wonder what it would feel like to hold you in my arms
I wonder what it would feel like to have you touch me
I wonder what it would feel like to touch you
I wonder what it would feel like to have you stroke me
I wonder what it would feel like to stroke you
I wonder what it would feel like to have you caress me
I wonder what it would feel like to caress you
I wonder what it would feel like to kiss you
I wonder how it would be if you loved me and I loved you
It's funny we haven't even gone out yet
But when we do
If things work out
I'll finally know what it's like to be with you
Author notes
Please no critical comments. This is my first love poem.
Written November 22nd, 2004
A contest entry
- Love Poems. by OurxBeginning.
300 points, ended February 12, 2008, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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A very simple write. I liked how real this was, and how you just let your thoughts leak out. A short write, but I'm sure everyone can relate. The ending wraps it up nicely.
Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Thank you for the comment. I'm glad you liked it.
~Amanda~
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Batting my lashes might work. Lol. Thanks for the comment.
~Amanda~
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Guys do suck sometimes! But this is a cute poem. Strike fierce and you will win the guy... or bat your lashes and work it girl!
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Thanks for the comment and you're such a brat, but that's part of why I love you.
~Amanda~
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Amanda and Carlos sittin' in a tree. K-I-S-S-I-N-G.... Oh, I crack myself up!
I would like to say, though, that the repetition of the lines draws my eyes, my attention, and my body to the last parts of each of those lines - I am melting into my own imagination of passionate moments. -
Hahahahahahahaha! Now flashing him some leg really would get his attention. Lol. Tiffany and her mom came over for Thanksgiving and made it bearable. Tiffany always cracks me up. I'll give my mom a hug.
~Amanda~
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Hey Rose..... flash him a little leg....lol.... he'll turn his head so quick you'll have to dial 911.... now that is taking notice....... I'm writing a book entitled Dating 101x....lol.... it's the "x" part you're gonna love..... hahahahahaa... just kidding around. Love ya kid. Hope you had a great thanksgiving..... give your Mom and big fat gigantic hug for me. Thanks.....
take care and see you soon....
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Now if only he could stop being busy with work and school and take me out already. I swear some guys are such dorks.
I hope to not be single for that much longer. Thanks for the comment.
~Amanda~
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Aw, This is very nice, I wish I had a guy that gave me the inspiration to write something like this... it sucks to be single Anyways, great write, I really enjoy reading your poems
and again... Happy Thanksgiving! 
---Sara 
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Thanks for the comment.
~Amanda~
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hmm very interesting, it seems that you like this fellow quite a bit i hope things work out for you
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I just might have to kill you. Lol.
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Don't forget your rubbers!!!!!! lol.... oops...... hahahaha
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Thanks for the comment.
~Amanda~
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Well, I think that someone really likes Carlos. That is a sexy name for a man... leaves me with images of a Latin lover with a silver tongue.
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