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Shower Confesions

*In the Shower already*

Tears falling down my already wet cheeks

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R      R
 I      I
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Maybe If I shave here it will make it all better
SKKK
Or maybe here then he will love me
SKKK
What about here he dosn't like it when I have hair her
SKKK

D
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Maybe if I scrub here really hard he will love me more
swisssh
Maybe here, he hates it when it dosn't smell perfect
swissssh swisssh
Maybe here, maybe then he will not cheat on me
Swissssh Swisssh Swisssh

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 I
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Or maybe if  am not such a phsyco BITCH he will love me

Drip drip drip drip

**Crunch onto the shower floor leaving nothing behind but a hairless beautifully cleaned dead body with slits on either of her wrists, the shower still running and one last tear rolling down her eye...**

D
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Drip Drip
Written November 21st, 2004

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  • Mrs. Dumas silver member
    November 23, 2004
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    I really liked this! It really shows how much people try to keep that "one" that they love so much. Don't worry, it will all work out and hunny, if he isn't happy with who you are and how you look and such, he isn't worth it! I'm here for you.

    Jess

  • Twol0st2bf0und
    November 22, 2004
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    I love this one michelle. It makes me think alot, and no guy is worth that. Some of the stuff you come up with scares me man... Anywhoo, great job, gtg, love ya! Cant wait tile ROck N BOwl!!!!!