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Melt


Melt

I melt into you
You melt into me.
One without the other
Should not be.

One we are
Yet two apart.
Love is our trigger
We think with our heart.

That blue eyed bishounen
Just won’t leave them alone.
His other half
Is as cold as stone.

Long haired girl
Look what you’ve done!
I’m a dark haired kaitou
You think this is fun?

I melt into you
You melt into me.
One without the other
Should not be.

Author notes

This is a very cool poem I found and it so describes DNAngel! and especially Dark.
It's kinda his perception because he is trapped in Daisuke's body but is still free.
this also needs some explaining for the non dnangel lovers out there.
the blue eyed bishounen is Satoshi who is trying to capture Dark.
Satoshi's other half is Krad, the complete opposite of Dark in almost every way, except for the wings... and even those are white while Dark has black. He's evil, mean, abusive,and just plan cold.but he is pretty hot. don't get me wrong never as hot as Dark!
Daisuke is the 14 year old boy who transforms into Dark when he thinks of the long haired girl he loves but turned him down adn she loves Dark.
and that would leave Dark.
The HOTTEST phantom thief ever! He steals art right out from under the polices noses, it is so funny! well hope you like this poem! thanks
Written November 19th, 2004

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Comments

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  • Angel Lunarious
    February 23, 2007

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    This was really flow-ish! Lol! I can't think of the word but this is great none the less!
    Thanks for entering and good luck!


  • bloodylove15
    February 23, 2007
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    bishounen,
    kaitou
    darling. what are these words? other than not knowing that, i really like it!


  • koupolga
    February 23, 2007

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    Hey this is awesome!!

    Wow, I really enjoyed this poem a great deal, especially the flow and the short lines.

    Great work!!


  • Claudia Incognito
    February 16, 2007
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    -gasp- D.N ANGEL!

    >) dark is sooooooooo mine ._. tehehe ^-^ well no, Krad maybe. Nice poem btw, t'was purdy


  • Artemis Gem
    February 12, 2007

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    One we are
    Yet two apart.
    Love is our trigger
    We think with our heart.

    so pretty-I like it! keep it up!

    DNANGEL!!!!!

  • a-crazed-hobo
    November 21, 2004
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    This reminds me of anime. Good job, nonetheless.

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