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Christmas Morning

Christmas magic from up above
As the air filters flakes
Coming from heaves sort of

Brings the magic to child of drum brakes
To the music of the horn
Or the clang of the drum
Santa is filled the air to adorn

Your family snuggled around the fireplace forlorn
Tinsel on the tree
And train whistling of winter
Found under the Christmas jubilee

As you open the surprise in store
On trial run fun of a sprinter
Leaping over hurdles to packages on the floor
Your parents smiling of joy

As they welcome the day with hot drinks
And warming themselves to the real McCoy's
As the day is filled with smells to blink
Of Christmas stockings filled with candy

Gingerbread people close
To the peppermint sticks come real handy
Filling the day with snow on the nose

Author notes


Written November 18th, 2004

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  • Judith Chandler
    December 22, 2008

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    You made me think of how perfect it all used to be, a simpler time though there may be kids who experience this now. I hope so.

    Thank you for entering my contest.

  • kendhal22
    December 11, 2004
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    Thank you for liking my poem. Kendhal22

  • mysticriver
    December 11, 2004
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    Wow..this is a really great Christmas Poem ....I like the imagery.

    Good Luck in this contest!

  • kendhal22
    December 11, 2004
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    Thank you for commenting and liking my poem. Kendhal22

  • nicole92st
    December 10, 2004
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    good job

    This is a really really good idea! I like hwo you described the winter/Christmas things that occur! Great job! You have a really good shot in this contest! Good Luck!
    ~Nicole~

  • kendhal22
    November 19, 2004
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    I'm really glad you like it and hope your son likes it too. Kendhal22


  • YerTweetyness
    November 18, 2004
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    You wrote such a wonderful poem.
    Thank you so much for taking the time to write.
    YerTweetyness

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