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Bedtime Prayer

Jesus keep me safe from harm,
hold me in your loving arms,
keep me safe hold me tight,
Jesus bless me through the night,
if I die before the night is through.
Jesus I want to be with you.


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I read the rules and I'm (insert religion here)
a born again Christian.
Written November 18th, 2004

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  • Slick99
    August 28, 2008

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    this is nothing short of beautiful Sandy. this is a great prayer!!! keep up the good work!! -slick99


  • neoladyem
    June 23, 2006
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    That is so lovely and holy. I going to try to memoize this prayer so I can say it. Really is cutie. Percufet for a child learn about God.


  • Sandygram
    December 11, 2004
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    Thank you so much for the wonderful words you wrote in your comment. I always enjoy hearing from you. Take care, Sandy .

  • mysticriver
    December 11, 2004
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    This is one of the best childrens prayer I have seen in writing in a while. You are so gifted at writing for the children


  • Cantras
    December 8, 2004
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    Rhythm a tad off, but definitely cutesy and childlike.


  • Sandygram
    December 2, 2004
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    Thank you so much for the lovely comment. I appreciate it. God bless. Take care, Sandy


  • aslanlight
    December 2, 2004
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    Says it all really. God keeping us safe, blessing and holding us, that's all we need, well said!


  • Mbrace
    December 2, 2004
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    Very cute indeed ...I liked how a child could remember it easily..well done


  • Sandygram
    November 18, 2004
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    Thank you for the nice comment. Take care, Sandy
    Edited on Nov 18, 6:57 p.m. because ''.

  • Sandygram
    November 18, 2004
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    Thank you Ann, you are so sweet. I bet you were a wonderful pre-school teacher.Take care and God bless you, Sandy

  • Michael 54
    November 18, 2004
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    Terrific

    Terrific little prayer, good for young and old. I like this very much. Take care and God Bless.

    Michael


  • November 18, 2004
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    excellent

    Sandy, just perfect! I taught pre-school, religious pre-school years ago, and the children would just love this one, but what can I say.....you are excellent with all the prayers you write! God Bless Ann Best of luck in the contest...don't think luck is needed, it's a winner!

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